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Interactive Complexity as Indigenous to Human Systems is the crazy Office-esque crack!AU of Moses und Aron I wrote for yuletide (I talk about my other yuletide fics here), set in a corporation where Moses is the Chief Scientist, Aaron is his salesman/spokesman, and God is the CEO, and instead of talking about God and religion they talk about science and algorithms. NO I DO NOT KNOW WHERE THIS CAME FROM. MY SUBCONSCIOUS MAY NEED TO GET OUT MORE.

It's also, in a sense, a companion story to "Waters." "Waters" treats what I had to say about my personal feelings about the religious philosophies M&A espouses and alternatives thereof, but it doesn't actually explicitly delve into the Moses and Aaron relationship at all (...they're not even characters in "Waters," no wait, I guess Moses gets one speaking line), and I wanted to do that. I also wanted to engage with what seekingferret called the game of telephone -- where the message from God gets changed and filtered, with a monotonic loss of transmission from God->Moses->Aaron->Israelites. (My other fic rejects that idea, so I wanted to do it here.)

And also, I wanted to reconcile Numbers 20 with M&A. There's a glancing reference to "the rock" in Act III of M&A that makes me believe that it is meant to have happened after the Meribah incident. How did that play in to the world of M&A? What happened at Meribah in the world of M&A, and how did that relate to the Act III drama where Aaron is cast out and (in my libretto stage directions) drops dead at the end? In the Bible version, Moses is involved and culpable; how would this even be possible in Schoenberg's conception? And even taking Numbers 20 alone, it never sat right with me that Moses got punished so severely for what seems like a really trivial matter; why was that? This fic is a partial answer to all these questions. (Only partial, because it assumes a closer personal relationship between Moses and Aaron than we really get in Schoenberg, not least because they don't start out as brothers.)

The real impetus for this story, though, was that I watched the Ruhrtriennale 2009 version of Moses und Aron, and that production utterly sold me on the relationship between Moses and Aaron themselves, and I found Aaron rather engaging (though of course flawed, as he is) in that production as well, but I just didn't find Moses at all likeable or sympathetic (okay, fine, "O wort, du wort, das mir fehlt" was shattering), which I think may have shaped some of my reactions to the opera. I mean, it's not the production's fault, because they were clearly trying (and from time to time succeded); Moses is not supposed to be likeable or sympathetic, he's supposed to be above such mundane things. But it makes a difference because Schoenberg clearly expects us to buy in to Moses' philosophy, which is hard for me personally to do when I'm busy thinking, "Man, Moses is really a jerk." Plus which people aren't actually like that -- I mean, solely superhuman jerks! And apparently when I'm confronted with this kind of situation, my response is to try to figure out away to make the character understandable. Through fic!

So I set out to make him a protagonist such that I, at least, could see where he was coming from, without losing sight of the fact that he really is a brusque and unyielding sort of personality. (I am totally aware that this completely goes against the spirit of what Schoenberg was doing, by the way. I think that Moses, like God, is supposed to be not understandable. But if anything this only encouraged me.) But I had to transpose it to the modern era to make his character comprehensible. And then I was at work and talking to a coworker about the necessary evil of HR, and I wrote down in my yuletide file, "Aaron is SO HR! ...no, wait, Sales." and it just sort of snowballed from there. I wrote pretty much the entire draft in a couple of days, before I had more than the bare seeds of ideas for the other fic.

I succeeded in terms of my own reaction. I feel very strongly about the purity of science, about how it can't be compromised for the sake of how you feel about anything. And translating Moses' unbendingness into that milieu made me much more sympathetic towards his point of view.

Interestingly, I completely failed to communicate a major portion of this where [personal profile] seekingferret was concerned, which makes me sad (not about seekingferret at all, only about my inability to communicate). Seekingferret wrote a very thoughtful and interesting critique of "Complexity" where he reads it as Moshe and Aaron on a more equal footing. In a certain sense he is right, and I will talk about that below. But in another sense, that is not what I meant at all! In "Waters," both Moses and Aaron are missing the point to some extent, which is not what Schoenberg meant but what I get out of it when I watch it. In "Complexity," Moshe is meant to be right. All right, there is a place for image in our imperfect finite minds trying to come to grips with the divine -- and I do believe that (in this world where the Tabernacle was built), and the first half of the fic makes that point -- but in both the central conflicts, the Golden Calf conflict and the Meribah conflict, Aaron is asking to compromise the idea for the sake of the image, compromise the scientific truth for the sake of getting the job done. The choice, when it comes down to the important choice, is between making something look good (the image) and the truth (the idea). And Aaron, in choosing appearances/image, is wrong, wrong, wrong; it is never right to compromise the analysis. You just don't misrepresent science, you must not, for your job or your friends or anything else. And I failed in not making this clear, because in my worldview it is so very obvious that Aaron is wrong that it didn't even occur to me that it might not be obvious to someone who isn't me and didn't know me.

(Moshe is so totally my POV character in this one, despite Aaron being a lot more likeable. What he says about organizational theory? Is what I think about organizational theory. (Sorry if there are any organizational theorists reading this! Feel free to educate me!) And I'm a scientist/engineer by training/profession, and have my discipline's ingrained suspicion of HR and Sales and management (here I should append that my company has lovely HR, no sales as a separate department, and quite understanding management, but it doesn't stop all us engineers from being suspicious of all of them nevertheless). And Aaron talking about quantum correlations? Does not, in fact, make any sense. Oh, Aaron.)

The tragedy -- at least in my particular reimagining; here I'm departing from Schoenberg -- is that when Moshe unbends a little, tries to let Aaron in, when he tries to make that compromise because he does, after all, love Aaron -- that's the moment when we find that Moshe was right all along, that Aaron is wrong, that this compromise can't be made, and when you try to make it, it leads to disaster. As seekingferret says, Moses is right, but the world sets us up for failure.

Well, that's what I meant, anyway. Perhaps that's not what actually came out :)

I'm really glad he wrote that piece of meta, both because it made me aware of this flaw in my writing and because he speaks to something I hadn't thought about when I wrote it -- the Moses-God relationship. Which I think he's completely right about -- as written, the CEO is this shadowy figure On High. (Heh, "Christian New Testament God." Made me laugh. Guilty!) Because of ase's beautiful beta work, I don't think it is so much of a problem in the first half, at least to my reading, but it is somewhat glaring in the second half, especially in the characters' reactions to and aftermath of the pivotal scenes, and it didn't have to be that way. Is seekingferret's reading of M&A correct? I have mixed thoughts on this -- but the point is, it's something I didn't think about when I wrote the story, and I should have, regardless of what my eventual answer turned out to be. About that he was wholly right.

Part of the problem, of course, is that the conception of God is split between the CEO and Science (or math, or algorithms, I think is what the fic actually says, but I'm using Science as a catchall phrase). Although the CEO is intended to be the crackified (New Testamentesque?) persona of God, it's really Science, or the truth embodied by science, that bears the philosophical weight of the Moses-God relationship in the opera. Although I understood this implicitly while I was writing, I don't think I figured it out explicitly, enough to spend time thinking about what it implied in terms of the character dynamics and relationships (in particular, both CEO-truth and CEO-Moses). Ah well.

And now that I am thinking about it, I suspect there are a couple of parts I could tweak very slightly that could address these concerns and make everything work rather better, so why didn't I? Eh. Well, if I have seekingferret's permission and blessing, perhaps I shall.


Paean of praise to betas: "Complexity" did not have a Judaism beta (for fairly obvious reasons, but in hindsight, I should have gotten one). [profile] elements_ao3 whacked the word choice like anything. [personal profile] mithrigil deserves major points for pointing out, "To be completely frank, this is more like 'if Schoenberg wrote bible fanfic instead of an opera and put all his kinks in it' than fanfic for the opera itself," and so have I summarized it. And, as I sort of said above, if I'd considered [personal profile] ase's critique more carefully, I might have made my point of view more understandable. To the extent that it is understandable, I totally have ase to thank for pushing me to that level.

There, I should probably have written an essay instead of fics and have been done with it :)

Date: 2013-01-02 03:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] seekingferret
Huh...

So yeah, I think you're right that trying to foist some of God onto Science instead of the CEO tripped me up. Because M&A is so relational, and when you think about it, Schoenberg's idea of representing God is incredibly daring and bold and risky and so central to establishing who Moses is in the first scenes. And science isn't something that you can relate to in the same way because it's avolitional. Though maybe that's worth exploring- how do you have faith in something that can't make a decision to honor your faith? How does faith in a mechanistic 'God' work? (Consider our conversations about my Jewish definition of emunah and its two-sided obligations when I'm talking about faith).

I dug up this paper I wrote on M&A in college last night and skimmed it. I'll send it to you later if you want, but one thing I'd written that I'd since forgotten about is a claim that because M&A is so relational in its structure, neither Aaron nor Moses can function without the other- in addition to Moses having an Ich-Du relationship with God and Aaron having an Ich-Du relationship with the People, Moses and Aaron have an Ich-Du relationship that attempts to bridge the gap. And interestingly, I claim that Schoenberg deliberately minimizes Moses's role and expands Aaron's, compared to the original Biblical story. I did a close reading of Exodus in the paper and pointed out all the places where Aaron's role is minimal or nonexistent and Schoenberg expanded it. And one of my hypotheses of why the parting of the sea is removed is that in Exodus, Aaron's barely involved in that story. So it's interesting to me that in analyzing your story I claimed that Aaron's role has once again been increased relative to its inspiration. I think that says something about Exodus and its perspective on the relationship.

In any case, yes, it was clear to me in reading that Moses was right in the sense that the science was right, but it's also not clear to me that following Moses's position would have saved their jobs. Isn't the point of this story that they were faced with an impossible choice between obeying the science and pleasing the customer? I'm also, as a fellow science/engineering person, a little more skeptical than you that in engineering there IS a correct answer rather than a particular balance of the cost-benefit analysis. In my experience the engineer who's unwilling to unbend a little bit from his idealized design in order to fit the customer's needs is often the one in the wrong.

But one thing I think is great about the CEO in a relational sense is in the golden calf fiasco when Aaron yells at Moses for being unavailable for forty days, that you also have Aaron say "I even tried to contact the CEO, but she's gone mountain-climbing or something." That's such a brilliant point, that we don't in either the Biblical account or the Schoenberg account see Aaron try to make direct contact with God. Though there are some Midrashim that try to address the question. A lot of Midrash is devoted to trying to justify Aaron's actions, and several include details that suggest Aaron acted passively and miracles happened that created the Golden Calf, suggesting that God perhaps did encourage the creation, or at least allowed the people to get what they wanted. For example there's a midrash that says that Aaron just threw the gold in the fire and a calf came out.

As regards Merivah, now that is something I have opinions and theories about. Have you seen my story Two Princes? Two Princes. Which is more about the politics of Numbers 20 than it is about the philosophy of Numbers 20, because there's a great political drama in that story alongside the theology.

Generally speaking I read Numbers 20 as being about the simple fact that even saints screw up (I'm not sure if Christians actually believe that, but Jews sure do). The Rabbis teach that God holds saints to a higher standard of behavior, so that sins that would just get added to the tally for ordinary people become magnified in their punishment for the righteous, because God only demands of us what we're capable of. Thus the claim is that Moses's sin is inscrutable because if any of us had done what Moses did God wouldn't have punished us.

Moses's likeability is an interesting point. In my giant M&A primer post I wrote "Meet Moses. He's a giant asshole. No, I dare you to show me a bigger asshole than Moses." I think one of the really interesting character choices Schoenberg makes is in suggesting that Moses actively doesn't like the fact that he is being called to save the people. Like, he has a Jonah complex. I think this interpretation is defensible from the text in a reaching sort of way. You can point to things like Moses calling them a stiff-necked people, to the way the Israelite he saved from the taskmaster yelled at him, to his reluctance to accept the call at the Burning Bush. But you can counter that stuff with the other side of the coin, in the Bible- Moses's connection to his family, his clear identification with the Israelite nation, his defense of the Israelites when God wants to destroy them- Schoenberg strips most of that away.

So I can understand struggling to like Moses, and yeah, I agree with you that the main effort Schoenberg makes in that direction is the "das mir fehlt" line, which savaged me the first time I heard it and still hurts like hell every time I hear it. As I also wrote in my big M&A post, "All he has is his God, and he feels abandoned by God, because God was supposed to bring redemption and deliverance and instead has only brought estrangement. Poor Moses. But don't feel bad, Moses is still a huge asshole."

But I don't know... ultimately I get over it, because I identify so deeply with Moses's struggle?

Date: 2013-01-03 08:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] seekingferret
Though I know what you're going to say back, I think: that it's our decision (or at least is in Judaism?) to have faith in a God that is making such a decision back.

Actually, that's not what I would say back. Instead, I'd invite you to consider the positivist 'theology' being set forth in all the 'New Atheist' literature. Absent a volitional deity, the positivists have faith in the Scientific Method but not in Science as in the forces of nature. I recall being absolutely shocked in Hawking's introduction to A Brief History of Time when he conceded that as far as he were concerned (philosophically speaking) gravity could stop working tomorrow, and he'd just have to turn the Scientific Method to whatever replaced it. Science in those terms is an avolitional deity following rules we don't understand. You can't have faith in that. You can't have faith that the sun will shine tomorrow.

So obviously there are those who reject this kind of positivism and decide that functionally at least they will have faith in the laws of nature. Hawking takes this approach on a day to day basis- until something observable changes he plans his life under the assumption that the sun will shine tomorrow. But, I mean... where does that faith come from?

I'm not saying this as any form of argument about the existence of God- God being convenient is not actually a compelling argument. I'm just saying that if "it happened yesterday, and the day before, and every time we've tried it" is the best assurance you're going to get, you take it, but it's not to me the basis for a genuine faith relationship.


in general I agree that neither Moses nor Aaron (or their relative philosophies) can function without the other, which is part of my argument in both fics (and as you probably saw I even tagged "Waters" to that effect).

Yeah, well, you tagged it "and if there were a third way?" but I wasn't really making claims about a Moses/Aaron dialectic. I find dialectics interesting, but sort of shallow. Moses and Aaron are people, not stand-ins for philosophical approaches, and when I say they can't function without the other I mean in a relational way, not in a "and their relative philosophies" way. Aaron and Moses believe that their philosophical gap is unbridgeable, because they are stubborn people who can't communicate with each other in the same language, and your Miriam is trying to present the third way because she loves them, not because she's interested in achieving dialectical synthesis. Right?

So yeah, that's why this is a tragedy, not because Idea triumphed over Image, which I imagine you're right, Schoenberg would largely say was a success. But it's a tragedy because it ends with Moses casting his own brother out of the nation, completely unsure of what his next step is, doubting that his belief in God will ever let him be anything more than a lonely man in the wilderness. Though I think you're right, that Schoenberg never set the third act because he wasn't ever satisfied with the text, not because he never had the music to go with it. (In my big M&A post I wrote something like "Yes, my favorite opera is unfinished. I know you're not surprised." I love and have always loved incomplete masterpieces. I love watching the artist running up against his limits.)

Date: 2013-01-04 03:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] seekingferret
More, later, but I have a rant about "Division by Zero" somewhere. Really, really awful math. Does not at all appreciate the relationship between math and empiricism. Doesn't appreciate at all that there is a relationship.

But one of the things we are learning about that relationship is that it has limits- Pauli Exclusion Principle, Godel's Theorem, Halting Problem, etc... One of the particularly bothersome problems for me with having faith in the scientific method and the discoverability of the world is that we already know it's not the Alpha and the Omega. (heh, sorry) Though I have the same problem as a person of faith, only it's called: Why did God create an entropic universe?

Date: 2013-01-09 05:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] seekingferret
Why ought there to be a connection between empirical counting and the Principia Mathematica?

There isn't some magical, inherent connection. This isn't a 'mystery of faith' kind of thing. There is a relationship because we designed a relationship, and in the 21st century we know how easy it is to design mathematical constructs that don't map onto any kind of reality. When I studied Number Theory my instructors spent a lot more time than was strictly necessary explaining the Peano Axioms to us so that we would understand that yes, even for something as simple as empirical counting, the relationship to mathematics is there because we designed the axioms, not because of the mystery of faith.

(I've seen the Wigner essay. I think it stretches the point. An essay in the NYTimes magazine that I should try to find again gave me this amazing quote, which is roughly "There are approximately 360 million people in America. That means that a million to one event happens to one of them every day." Surprising relationships do not signify magical relationships.)

Date: 2013-01-13 03:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] seekingferret
Yeah, I mean, when you study closely the history of scientific discoveries based on unexpected mathematics, you often find that say, Einstein knew he had made a discovery that had a systematic relationship he didn't understand. So he talked to all of the mathematicians he knew and eventually somebody pointed him to a paper Poincare had written thirty years earlier- but that was only after he'd looked at and rejected hundreds of other mathematical frameworks. That's where selection bias comes in. It wasn't like Poincare's theorems had an inherent and immediately obvious rightness over other theorems that don't have any physical value.

We simply designed (or borrowed from existing work) mathematics that worked. I mean, it's interesting that a sort of convergence happened, where over the course of human history neither the physics or the math existed, and then within a thirty year period you had both, but you could equally hypothesize that had Poincare not written the paper, Einstein would have had to find a mathematician and force him to develop it. Or else maybe Einstein's great discovery would have gone nowhere. Who knows what physical discoveries we can't act on now because we haven't yet come up with mathematics to explain them?

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