You were awesome! I really did find your comments (as always) to be very helpful -- and of course I always like knowing what works too :) And I really didn't mean my story to be like your rarewomen story, except that my recipient asked specifically for a corporate AU :)
And I loved your story as well! Eve and M... I think your writing captures their understated (but supercharged) relationship really well. I did a lot of squeeing over it too, as I remember -- I think I mostly had squee comments, and only really had one substantive comment besides fixing some SPAG that had crept in :)
Hmm. The font is whatever Scrivener's native font is (I'm too lazy to change it) :) That's cool! I do find that it's a very different experience beta'ing a work in one font and then seeing it in AO3 in another font -- which seems weird to me, but there it is.
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Date: 2014-05-16 01:59 pm (UTC)And I loved your story as well! Eve and M... I think your writing captures their understated (but supercharged) relationship really well. I did a lot of squeeing over it too, as I remember -- I think I mostly had squee comments, and only really had one substantive comment besides fixing some SPAG that had crept in :)
Hmm. The font is whatever Scrivener's native font is (I'm too lazy to change it) :) That's cool! I do find that it's a very different experience beta'ing a work in one font and then seeing it in AO3 in another font -- which seems weird to me, but there it is.